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张文静:雅思口语高分妙用
2020-06-24 16:08
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叮铃铃,敲黑板看过来,雅思口语如何突破高分瓶颈,很多同学在考试拿到分数的时候就会傻眼了,我们平常练习的时候自我感觉非常良好,哎,觉得肯定是在6分以上啊,但是成绩拿到手上,就会赤裸裸的打脸,原因是什么呢?
因为大家都想妄图“以量取胜”而败在了“以质取胜”,简而言之,就是语言质量不过关,那么针对这个问题,我们今天就从语法评分标准之一 —— 语法的句型多样性(grammatical range)的角度为大家进行支几个加分的妙招,考试中,很多学生的答案缺陷是过于简短,除了在流利度和连贯性上的失分外,在语法角度总是出现一些不能体现语法优势的答案,踩了雷区。
首先同学们你们一定要记住,要想游戏通关,你就必须得掌握游戏规则,我们今天重点我们以P1话题为例,来剖析我们语法的多样性。
话不多说,先上示例:
Q: Please describe your hometown a little.
A: My hometown is Zhengzhou, it’s very beautiful and modern.
It has lots of shopping malls and entertainment facilities.
从评分角度而言,这些答案就是多个独立的简单句型的堆砌组合,所谓简单句型即只包含一个信息点,但是我们看看雅思官方的评分标准对高分表现有什么要求呢?如图所示:
不管是6分还是7分及以上无不透露出对于语法多样性的要求,说明雅思考试更想看到大家对于语法的掌控能力,能够驾驭不同的句型,既包括简单句,也包括复合句。
好,大家再回过头来看看刚才那位小烤鸭的答案,雅思口语的评分标准来进行分析的话,除了连接词比较缺乏外,最主要是句型简单句占比例较多,没有展现出语法的多样性,这个答案的得分就会距离我们达到高分的目标分数还是有差距的,那如果从复合句的角度去考虑,可以怎么优化刚才的表述呢?
首先,可以用定语从句进行优化, 来起到修饰的作用。
Q: Please describe your hometown a little.
A: My hometown is Zhengzhou, it’s very beautiful and modern.
It has lots of shopping malls and entertainment facilities.
优化后:
Zhengzhou is a beautiful and modern place where you can enjoy a variety of sceneries because…
Zhengzhou is the kind of place which is very beautiful and modern because it has lots of shopping malls and entertainment facilities.
Zhengzhou is one of the most beautiful and modern cities that I have ever seen because…
由此可见,我们是可以在表述中使用些定语从句,修饰人事地物等信息。
再次,可以使用些名词性从句来优化,来进行过渡和信息补充。
Q: Do you like your hometown?
A: Definitely, I like my hometown very much because it has lots of delicious food and various kinds of tourist attractions such as Shizu mountain.
这个答案仍旧是句型多样性不足,所以可以借助句型优化为:
Definitely, the reason why I like this place is that Zhengzhou has lots of delicious food…
Definitely, I like my hometown very much,what I mean is that Zhengzhou has lots of delicious food…
Definitely, I like my hometown very much,What I’d like to say is that Zhengzhou has lots of delicious food…
所以,当想要补充些信息时或者帮助过渡时,可以借助名词性从句让自己的表述瞬间“高大上”。
那有同学会问如果针对一些考察未来的这些时态的题目呢,我们还可以用哪种句型呢?Bingo,我们可以用if条件从句,大家可以看下这个示例:
Q: Do you think you will continue living there for a long time?
A: Yes, I think I will because this place is very potential and vibrant with lots of modern buildings and convenient transport facilities, which can save me lots of time and living expense.
我们可以把句子套用成if条件从句,优化后:
Yeah, if I had the chance, I would like to live there for the next 20 or 30 years because this place is very……
由上可见,if条件从句可以对信息进行补充说明,上述三种从句,大家可要灵活使用在自己的表述中哦,不仅可以符合考试的评分要求,而且可以让你在考试中游刃有余。
最后,祝福小烤鸭们在2020年的屠鸭考试中,一往无前,所向披靡!
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