第一段：The table gives a breakdown of the different types of family who were living in poverty in Australia in 1999.

　　分析：开头段进行改写, show the proportion of different categories 换成了give a breakdown of the different types， give a breakdown of 表示 ‘对……做出分析’（建议用在小作文数据图的开头哦）

　　更多例句：

　　Just enter a few pieces of information below, and the Taxpayer Receipt will give you a breakdown of how your tax dollars are spent on priorities like education, veterans benefits, or health care. 

　　living in poverty 改成了 who were living in poverty,也就是用成从句的形式。

　　第二段：On average,11%of all households,comprising almost two million people,were in this position.However,those consisting of only one parent or a single adult had almost double this proportion of poor people,with 21%and 19% respectively.

　　小作文第二段一般说一下整体情况，如总数如何， 最大的数值是谁

　　来学习一下换词吧：be in this position 其实在替换be in poverty， 尽量多用this 等代词来进行同义替换哦。

　　consist of 包含

　　have almost double this proportion of... 是...的两倍

　　第三段：Couples generally tended to be better off,with lower poverty levels for couples without children(7%)than those with children(12%).It is noticeable that for both types of household with children,a higher than average proportion were living in poverty at this time.

　　tend to 常常用在动词前，也包括be 动词哦，这样说话不会太绝对。

　　Couples generally tended to be better off,with lower poverty levels for couples without children(7%)than those with children(12%). 大家以后想要把数据放在括号里，就可以模仿这里用with 这样的句式呢。

　　be better off 更富裕

　　those with children 是在用代词，避免重复呢，同时衔接性显得更好

　　It is noticeable that  连接更好，同时用了从句

　　第四段：Older people were generally less likely to be poor,though once again the trend favoured elderly couples(only 4%)rather than single elderly people(6%).

　　be less likely to be 

　　the trend favour ....这个有点拟人化的味道哦

　　第五段：Overall the table suggests that households of single adults and those with children were more likely to be living in poverty than those consisting of couples.

　　the table suggests that 

　　be more likely to be 

　　这一段在说整体的状况单身的和带小孩的更穷

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